HerecomesSpring.
Theworldcomestoitself.
ItookmyluggageandhadanextemporaneoustravellastSunday.
Firstly,Ihadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,wewerehavinglunch,sangattractivesongswhichmadeusunbuttoned.
Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,,Imadebestofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoymylife.
Secondly,ersweresinging,birdsweresinging,ngivepeoplehopeandenergytostruggleforourgoals.
Asawill-graduatedstudent,Ilearnedalotfromthistrip.
AsIsaid,andboringthoughCollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend,justascockroaches.
Fighting!
修改后：
The spring is coming; and the weather becomes warmer and warmer. LastSunday, I went outing with my parents.
First,nthatmountainismuch fresherthanthatinthe city. Therewehadabiglunchwhichcontainedvariousfoodssuchasfish,chicken,muttonandsoon. Whenwe werehavinglunch,birdskeptflying aroundus. Theysang songswhichmadeus happier. At that moment, my father said, “Inmoderncitylife,wearealwaysworriedaboutourpersonalaffairs,andhardlyhavetimetorelax ,let’s makebestuse ofthisenjoyabletimetoenjoyourselves.” Then,sweresinging,evenfisharesinging.
Springisreally ngivepeoplehopeandenergytostrugglefortheir goals. Springstartslivesandputs andboringthoughcollegeentranceexaminationis,Iwillencouragemyselftostruggletotheend.
高三:吴子鸣